Damn this is inspirational shit wow...I'm amazed...oh yea and this is poetic reven account got hacked and whatnot

honest opinion

the first main melody this comes in is a tad loud but, i do like the variation throughout the whole piece i admit that. I like the fact that you have unexpected drops in your music the drop at 1:36 caught me off guard lol. sounds like your using fruity loops.
do you know about vst's plugins? if you are using fruity loops.
I think that better sounds would do you alot of justice.

overall I liked how you mixed everything though it isn't mastered the variation and the switch ups make up for alot and it kept me interested.
I've let this repeat a few times now and I'm still not tired of it.

4/4
9/10

you have to love mario :)

this is more of a remix. I'm really digging this. I like the drop at 14 seconds when everything pauses and comes back in. frankly you should make a full remix because of the direction this instrumental is headed sounds like it'll be a hell of a piece.

5/5
10/10