honest opinion
the first main melody this comes in is a tad loud but, i do like the variation throughout the whole piece i admit that. I like the fact that you have unexpected drops in your music the drop at 1:36 caught me off guard lol. sounds like your using fruity loops.
do you know about vst's plugins? if you are using fruity loops.
I think that better sounds would do you alot of justice.
overall I liked how you mixed everything though it isn't mastered the variation and the switch ups make up for alot and it kept me interested.
I've let this repeat a few times now and I'm still not tired of it.
4/4
9/10